My First draft for the final design

My first draft
This is my first draft for my final design for the front cover of my student magazine.
I am really proud of how this came out and I also love the layout as it looks just like a magazine.
If there was something wrong with this one I think that there is too many pictures involved an there isn't usually this uch on normal front covers.
All I have to do now is change the colours and add in the pictures this will make it look a lot more effective and more like a magazine.

Please comment on this and say what you think!